I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Ricci. You have made some very brief comments. I am wondering why your outcome was not the best. Was it bland, salty, too spicy etc? Have you considered what changes you could make to improve the recipe?
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Hi Ricci. You have made some very brief comments. I am wondering why your outcome was not the best. Was it bland, salty, too spicy etc? Have you considered what changes you could make to improve the recipe?
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