Monday, August 29, 2016

I am the dark fast panther I train running all night and day. I am the fastest out of all the other runners. I am fast then lighting when it hits the ground. I compete in the animal Olympics but what the animal’s don’t know is that i'm half human.

When the animal's are asleep I sneak out the dark scary rain forest. Then I change into Usain Bolt when I was a kid I forgot my launch. My teacher came up to me with a grin on his face and said.. ‘’If you can beat this kid in a race to that tree you can have my food. I lined up right next to my friend then I said ‘’what are you doing? I said. I’m racing you I was shocked that I was vsing him.  Then my teacher said GO!! I ran as fast as I could I was losing. I turned around and I saw the food but then I ran over the rock and then My foot started to bleed. It was sore as a little splinter.but I did not stop I just took a breath and ran. Then I past my friend I said bye bye he said NO NO NO I WANTED TO BEAT HIM FOR FOOD!!!!!!. My surprised teacher said WOW good job. Here you go said the teacher. My friend said good job.

Now when I change to a human sometimes i’m alone. I have no one to race with but I don’t care
I just train and train running. It bored with out a friend I have to race in two day for the animal Olympics was sad and lonely finally one more day until I race some of the best runner in the world.

I wake up I go to the animal Olympics I line up the monkey said GO!. I was running as fast as I could I past the finish I win gold I am the best at running.     

Friday, August 26, 2016

Dream Giver

The Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.
We know we have done this when:
  • We have painted a picture with our words.
  • Made the reader want to read on.
  • Used more than 4 similes.
  • Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..
Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.
You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.

Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet

Start your writing here.

I am the Dream Giver. I get up every night and brush my YUCK, BROWN TEETH!!!. Then I have a shower and wash my long, thick, hairy legs. My house is old, older than the oldest man in the world. I wash my holy shiny wings and set off. The first place I had to go was a dark old Orphanage. I went to open the old, white, door. It made a sound like it was going to break. I walk slower than a sloth.

I gave the kids dream’s then I ended up with one more kid. It looked like he was reading Grim Reaper’s Final Kill. I did not want to wake the boy up. So I left two eggs on his warm, white, bed.  

Then I quietly tiptoed out the old white door but the boy turned his head and broke one of the eggs into Grim Reaper’s Final Kill. I stopped in fear, his dream was now a nightmare. In his nightmare he was in a dark forest. Then he started to walk. The trees were old and covered with webs and little scary bugs. The boy heard a whisper behind him his eye were bulging and he started to cry. But the boy just walked and walked until there was a big rock. It was as big as an elephant,.
There were dead people and dry blood on the rock. There was an old sign that said “you're next”  The boy ran as fast as he could.

Then he stopped and had a rest, but when he went to sit on a rock he heard a loud BANG!!!. He did not move, he was as still as a crocodile trying to eat you. But then the Grim Reaper was behind him. As he just stayed there, the Grim Reaper went to cut his head off with his sharp shiny bald.

But I came and saved the day. The boy had a big grin on his face the I turned  the Grim Reaper into an old mossy statue. The boy said “thanks”  I said  “now go back to sleep”. He started to get tired and started to sleep.

I flew fast as a tiger, then the little boy woke up from his dream I flew straight out that white old door. The boy saw my shadow, his eyes were shocked that he saw me. But he did not care he just READ THAT BOOK!!. Now the boy is going to have another nightmare. I did that whole thing for nothing. I was as angry as raging bull.

Friday, August 12, 2016

          The Switch

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Imagine switching bodies with another person here is a story. A guys name Ronaldo was a famous player for football. One time when he was playing in front of 15000,00 people he was running to a kid with a ball.
Ronaldo was running way too fast. He was faster than a dog. As Ronaldo was getting closer to the ball boy. BANG!! He smashed his head into the ball boy. Screenshot 2016-08-11 at 10.03.10.png

The whole crowd stopped in fear, 5 seconds later both of them got up. Everyone was around them taking photos. The next morning the ball boy and Ronaldo got out of bed. Ronaldo thought that he was the ball boy. And the ball boy thought that he was Ronaldo. Both of them screamed in fear.

The ball boy who thinks that he is Ronaldo ran down stairs. Mum and Dad were making breakfast. The ball boy said why am I here. The Mum and Dad said good morning. The ball boy said I don’t know you. Then he yelled STRANGER DANGER!!!. Then the ball boy ran out the house scared he thinked to himself who am I and why am I here. So he ran of fast as a tiger. As the ball boy was running he went past a football game.

He asked the boys can I play. The boy said HELL NO!!! Only if you can get a goal. The ball boy was so embarrassed but he did it. The boys were laughing said YOU SUCK!!! But the ball boy proved the boys wrong the ball boy said who sucks now. So then they let him play. He skilled all of them everyone was scared of him.

Now Ronaldo a lady went up to him and said here’s your key NOW LEAVE YOUR LATE FOR TRAINING!!! She cried. Then he got into his pagani zonda and drove fast as a flabby boy. As he got to training all the boys looked at him. Then the coach came out of nowhere  and said RONALDO GO HOME YOU ARE SO BAD!!.

Now the ball boy 10 years later he was vs Ronaldo, Ronaldo looked at the ball boy like I remember you. As the both of them went out the stadium the ball boy kick the ball. ronaldo ran for it then BANG they hit head again 5 seconds later they were back to there own boby. The end  

Thursday, August 11, 2016


WALT kupu hou Olympics we know we have done the when we have correct image for each kupu hou