- Full stops and capital letters
- Using language features to make our writing more interesting
Friday, August 18, 2017
This is the new 100 word challenge
You will be working in your Tuakana/Tēina pair for this writing task. You will be collaborating to create an exciting piece of writing together.
Before you start:
Make a copy of the file and save it in your tuhituhi folder. Name it “T3 W4 - 100 word challenge ” (then your initials)
Here is the latest prompt:
Just what is the story behind this character’s laughter?
The form will close on 19th August at 23.45 BST
WALT: Create a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the main character
We need to focus on these things:
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blogs.
Hi I’m a seal I was going home and I had the most funniest day. I will start from the beginning, I was at school and my friend told me a joke it made me laugh so hard.He told me jokes he said “ what time did the man go to the dentist? tooth hurty” and I started laughing. after school I was going home I saw a man he was walking home his pant fell down I started to laugh. I saw a clown telling some jokes he told me the most funniest joke he said “ Coca Cola.
Friday, August 11, 2017
- Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy. Save your file into your Tuhituhi folder.
- Click on the url below and watch the short clip.
Before you start writing:
You are writing from the viewpoint of one of the swimmers OR that you are one of the whales. Think about how you would describe the setting that you are in.
How are you going to create atmosphere in your writing?
What sort of language are you going to use to create tension and suspense and tell the reader that you are thinking and feeling?
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of someone who is dreaming that they are swimming with whales OR that they are a whale.
We need to focus on these things:
- Full stops, capital letters
To start with you will write a description of the first scene, now describe what it is like as you move through the underwater landscape.
Use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of somebody who is dreaming that they are swimming with whales. Create suspense and tension you swim through the water, it is as if you belong there.
Go to this Whale Fantasia PADLET and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives, onomatopoeia, similes and metaphors.
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
It was 6 o'clock in the morning and I haven’t slept all night because of this day. I quickly got my togs on and ran to the beach, the waves crashed into the shore like a tornado.
I didn’t want to go in the water so I just looked at the view. I stayed there from 6 o’clock until about 12 because the view was so beautiful I couldn't take my eyes off it. As I was walking to the water I could feel the seaweed it was as slimy as spaghetti.
I dived into the water like a dolphin and the water was as cold as ice. The deeper I went the darker it was. As I went deeper I could see more sea animals. I saw swordfish with their noses as sharp as a knife.I saw electric eels that glowed like glowworms in a cave.
As I was swimming in the cold blue ocean I came upon three big whales, they were as big as a classroom. I felt like I was in a big fishing tank. After looking at the whales I swam up to the top of the water, then I decided to go home so I swam back to shore.
The sand was so hot as hot as an oven as it burnt my feet. I ran across the sand and got an ice cream. Then all of a sudden I woke up in my bed,looked around and I realised that the whole thing was a dream.
Tuesday, August 1, 2017
Create your own Kayak
Create your design
*Screenshot the finished image
Describe your design
I have a SLALOM K1 kayak with red white and black stripes to represent the maori flag. I have chosen a black and white fist too.
Describe who would buy your design
You should buy it because it is so stable so when you think you would fall out no it will tilt back. Only 50 dollars but the first 500 people get it half price. Kids from 7 to 9 or over can only ride the master piece. Only at the warehouse so call now 0800001001.
Share your screenshot and your descriptions on your blog.
With a Walt and Task description.
Monday, July 3, 2017
WALT be cybersmart using a game called Interland. In this game there are 4 different cyber worlds each focusing on a different part of cyber smart. The green mountain which is the one we started with is about being kind and caring. I got to the top of this mountain and scored **** see my screenshot below.
Then I decided to have a go at the Kind Kingdom which is about not letting bullies get in your way.
I loved learning about cyber smart by using this game.
Screenshot of your score (s)