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Friday, April 7, 2017

Tuhituhi

The Cloud             
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The cloud came from the sea.....
He was not like other clouds,
The wind could not command him,
The more he saw, the more he did,
And the more he did, the more he became,
You see he wasn't just a cloud...
He was a cloud made of more.

Learn
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Before you start writing think about the following questions:
Where this strange cloud came from?  It cannot be commanded by the wind, who is controlling it? Does the cloud have a purpose in life? Does the cloud have a personality?


Create  
WALT write a narrative.

Describe the cloud growing up, being just another ordinary cloud in the sky until one day..... Something happened to change all that.

We know we have done this when:
We have written what the cloud is thinking as it discovers what it’s purpose is in life and we have described some of the adventures that have happened.


Go to this padlet The Cloud and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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Just to let you know I was not a cloud, I was just a normal person. But this one night when I was sleeping in my room I saw this monster out of my window. He had a pale face, and sharp white teeth that had drips of blood going down his mouth, and red eyes that glisten in the moonlight.



I was terrified that the monster would kill me, he could see in my eyes fear. He
just kept on looking at me until I looked away and the monster was gone. I could hear the dog barking and then the monster was under my bed, it started to move and then the monster came out of under the bed and he jumped over me.


I am now a spirit but not just a spirit a cloud!, I was thinking to myself ‘’I wonder what kind of journey would come’’ So I started to move. Since now I have been in a lot of storms that I have survived. I was still scared until I saw something in the distance… it was a city.


I went there to see what is going on. There were trees that had light green leafs, and a little kid that was playing in the park, also I could see the people working in there office with there computer in the tower that I was looking at.


The wind can not command me, and I’m not a normal cloud,  I don’t know if
other clouds have a spirit in them. As I was looking above the city people were looking at me, then I saw this fire going on so I ran over well not ran but went there as fast as I could.


Luckily I made it people could have died. I got angry so that I could turn into a storm, I was angry now it started to rain the fire men was shocked for what I have done for them now I can live my life.
But it’s not done, a storm was coming I had to try and stop it. I went to ask the gods if they could stop it but they were just so damn useless so I had to stop it myself. I could see the dark cloud coming my way, I could feel the wind blowing in my face I huffed and puffed and BOOM the storm was gone.


Friday, March 31, 2017

Giant Giraffe



This is my panui pukapuka for the week about Giraffes.

Tom Trueheart

Tom Trueheart             
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"Tom Trueheart must rescue his six brothers and their Princess brides from the Land of Dark Stories."  
Tom is the hero of the story.
"He has a special sword,  He has courage, He has purpose, There is only one problem, he is the size of a thumb."


Learn
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Before you start writing think about the following questions:
What has happened to Tom’s brothers and their Princess Brides? How have they been captured and why?
What do you think Tom will do to rescue them? What does his plan involve?
Do you think that being the size of a thumb is going to be a disadvantage or an advantage?


Create  
WALT use adjectives to describe a setting.
WALT write a rescue operation for Tom’s family, remembering that Tom is only the size of a thumb.

We know we have done this when:
We have described the opening scene in detail. What do we see, hear, smell, taste and feel.

We have planned a rescue operation thinking about how Tom is going to save his family.


Go to this padlet Tom Trueheart and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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‘’Chip CHIP’’ I yelled out for Chip I thought that he must be asleep. ‘’CHIP COME HERE NOW!’’ I was in the forest I was cold, like a lion being in antarctica.

It was winter and I was alone, ‘’hello you little boy’’ said this old man, ‘’who are you?’’ he asked ‘’ i’m Tom William’’ ‘’what a dumb name’’ the old man started to laugh ‘’ i’m on a mission to find my six brother’’.
‘’Jack, James, Mikaere, Tyler, Jelly, Belly,’’ the old man was shocked ‘’wait I know them... they are at the petrat castle’’.  

‘’Ok i’m going to go there right now’’ 1 hour later ‘’nah I will go tomorrow’’ ‘’come on man’’ said the old man I went to sleep on my bed’’.

‘’AHHHHH’’ yelled the old man ‘’BOY COME ON WE HAVE TO GET TO THAT CASTLE!’’ I got up and got my stuff and went off. ‘’So where is this castle?’’ I asked ‘’ up north’’ ‘’WHAT!’’ I yelled ‘’how are we going to get there?’’

‘’A jetpack’’ ‘’do you have a jetpack?’’ I asked ‘’no!’’ but then we found a boat so we got on it and started to paddle. ‘’Paddle faster man’’ ‘’your the one that is not paddeln’’.
2 weeks 1.PM we made it ‘’yes finally’’ we found the castle and went to go and find my brothers ‘’ok let’s go’’. Me and the old man had to fight danger, fire balls, rockets, even water THAT HAD A SHARK IN IT! There was a little bridge that you had to walk over, ‘’ i’m going first’’.



I was scared that I would die so then I started to run and the bridge was starting to break, and as soon I jumped off the bridge was broken into pieces ‘’how am I getting to you?’’ ‘’don’t know bye bye’’ ‘’NO DON’T YOU DARE GO!’’

I left him and I found my brothers ‘’yeah let's get out of here we ran off to a little pathway and we made it out. ‘’ARE YOU STILL HERE?!’’yelled the old man but I just ran off with my brothers and went off. But it’s not the end to be counted.

Friday, March 24, 2017

Arctic circle

Arctic Circle             
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The Arctic Circle animation.  In a desolate landscape one man's survival depends on the single fruit tree by his house.  One day a strange box arrives and gives him a special power.  Will he be able to control his urge to keep the box from his neighbour?


Learn
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Before you start writing think about the following questions:
What is happening? Where is the man? Is he human, how can we tell?  Why is he there on his own?  What option will he choose?

Create  
WALT create an internal monologue for the main character.

We know we have done this when:
We have written what the character is thinking as he discovers what the box of magic is able to do and decides what he will do now?


Go to this padlet Arctic Circle and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similes and metaphors.

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I am in the Arctic Circle. It was colder than being in the antarctic sea, my neighbor was working on something that could change the world. I hated him, people say that he is smarter than me, but he won’t be. It was morning I was hungry then a big fat hippo, my neighbor came out of his little house ‘’good morning’’ said my neighbor, I just look away and through to myself I  should punch him.

I started to spin a handle that grows apples, it takes for ever!. My neighbor went back into his little house while I was growing my apples. I had an idea to go to his house and put a bomb there, as I was thinking an apple fell on my head, I started to scream because I thought it was aliens.

But there was a box, I wonder what in it. I walked to it like a small mouse it moved ‘’THERE IS A ALIENS!’’  I yelled but i’m not stupid so I run to it and I touch.
BOOM!! I flew in the air and hit my head on the tree, my neighbor came out his little house and started to laugh. But when I touched the tree it grow apples, I was so surprised. I was thinking that when I touch the box I would grow apples without taking for ever!.

But then the box started to move, ‘’HEY USE YOUR NOGGIN DON’T GO TO HIM’’ I was kind of a bum. It moved again then I started to ran after it, ‘’COME HERE!’’ I yelled, I blocked it’s way I jumped on it.

Then the box was gone then my hands turned yellow now I was happy but then I was turning into a box ‘’NO NO!!’’ I yelled ‘’NO!’’ I was a box know sounds stupid but really i’m a box.

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Thursday, March 16, 2017

Lighthouse keeper

   


         
                        This is my thing link. It's about a lighthouse keeper who doesn't get his lunch,
                                                                        Hope you like it!

Pangarau DLO 2017

video


This is my DLO my WALT is to make a question with a bigger number, hope you like it.