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Monday, June 27, 2016

WALT use correct punctuation and adjectives
1856 a little boy called Jack he was 6 he  loved going on his bike  with mum and dad one dark night Jack felt something in his bed it was his cat Jack went back to sleep. He had a dream he was in a maze he did not know where he was going so He ran as fast as he can then there was a

very big tower there was a old man he said welcome to tower of terror. Jack screamed he went into the tower there was kid behind a door. jack opened the door the kid wanted to kill Jack so he ran as fast as he can. there was a big slime the slime said want to eat my blood Jack said no the slime tried to eat jack the slime was to slow. jack ran into a spider a very big one jack got stuck in the spider's web the spider was going to eat jack he pushing as hard as he can the spider got his leg so jack had to run with his arms blood started to come out. jack got to the top of the tower there was a ghost the ghost said welcome to ghost beach jack said but there is no beach the ghost said look down jack looked down the tower the maze turned into a beach there were shacks and sea snacks the ghost pushed jack into the beach then jack got killed by the sea snake.          

Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Kupu Hou

WAL to increase our te reo maori.

This is not a planet its my home

I am dreaming in my head I wonder what kind of food there is. it feel’s like i'm in a trapped house I look out the window it really does not look like my home that I lived in. it was dark there were a lot of stars my eyes are blurry as I try to wake up. My dad would make me a cake he always puts nuts in it he puts the nuts in it they can’t even fit in the cake. I look around the trapped house for a banana but I couldn't find it. Then I went back to sleep but I couldn't cause i knew that I would miss seeing my dad and I would not be happy. So  I just stay awake when I get to earth my dad would be very old I wonder what he look’s like. The shine sun was out the window then I knew that I was coming home. I have a big smile on my face as I look on the left side I see a picture of my dad 
I have one tear coming out of my eyes. I feel happy i’m going to earth the atmosphere was very hard to go down but Finley I got to earth. I Looked around I
 say to myself what happened when 
I was in space. Then I face planted on the ground and said NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!NO!!!!!! The end.