Friday, March 31, 2017
Tom Trueheart
Tom Trueheart
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"Tom Trueheart must rescue his six brothers and their Princess brides from the Land of Dark Stories."
Tom is the hero of the story.
"He has a special sword, He has courage, He has purpose, There is only one problem, he is the size of a thumb."
Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip
Before you start writing think about the following questions:
What has happened to Tom’s brothers and their Princess Brides? How have they been captured and why?
What do you think Tom will do to rescue them? What does his plan involve?
Do you think that being the size of a thumb is going to be a disadvantage or an advantage?
Create
WALT use adjectives to describe a setting.
WALT write a rescue operation for Tom’s family, remembering that Tom is only the size of a thumb.
We know we have done this when:
We have described the opening scene in detail. What do we see, hear, smell, taste and feel.
We have planned a rescue operation thinking about how Tom is going to save his family.
Go to this padlet Tom Trueheart and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.
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Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
‘’Chip CHIP’’ I yelled out for Chip I thought that he must be asleep. ‘’CHIP COME HERE NOW!’’ I was in the forest I was cold, like a lion being in antarctica.
It was winter and I was alone, ‘’hello you little boy’’ said this old man, ‘’who are you?’’ he asked ‘’ i’m Tom William’’ ‘’what a dumb name’’ the old man started to laugh ‘’ i’m on a mission to find my six brother’’.
‘’Jack, James, Mikaere, Tyler, Jelly, Belly,’’ the old man was shocked ‘’wait I know them... they are at the petrat castle’’.
‘’Ok i’m going to go there right now’’ 1 hour later ‘’nah I will go tomorrow’’ ‘’come on man’’ said the old man I went to sleep on my bed’’.
‘’AHHHHH’’ yelled the old man ‘’BOY COME ON WE HAVE TO GET TO THAT CASTLE!’’ I got up and got my stuff and went off. ‘’So where is this castle?’’ I asked ‘’ up north’’ ‘’WHAT!’’ I yelled ‘’how are we going to get there?’’
‘’A jetpack’’ ‘’do you have a jetpack?’’ I asked ‘’no!’’ but then we found a boat so we got on it and started to paddle. ‘’Paddle faster man’’ ‘’your the one that is not paddeln’’.
2 weeks 1.PM we made it ‘’yes finally’’ we found the castle and went to go and find my brothers ‘’ok let’s go’’. Me and the old man had to fight danger, fire balls, rockets, even water THAT HAD A SHARK IN IT! There was a little bridge that you had to walk over, ‘’ i’m going first’’.
I was scared that I would die so then I started to run and the bridge was starting to break, and as soon I jumped off the bridge was broken into pieces ‘’how am I getting to you?’’ ‘’don’t know bye bye’’ ‘’NO DON’T YOU DARE GO!’’
I left him and I found my brothers ‘’yeah let's get out of here we ran off to a little pathway and we made it out. ‘’ARE YOU STILL HERE?!’’yelled the old man but I just ran off with my brothers and went off. But it’s not the end to be counted.
Friday, March 24, 2017
Arctic circle
Arctic Circle
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The Arctic Circle animation. In a desolate landscape one man's survival depends on the single fruit tree by his house. One day a strange box arrives and gives him a special power. Will he be able to control his urge to keep the box from his neighbour?
Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip
Before you start writing think about the following questions:
What is happening? Where is the man? Is he human, how can we tell? Why is he there on his own? What option will he choose?
Create
WALT create an internal monologue for the main character.
We know we have done this when:
We have written what the character is thinking as he discovers what the box of magic is able to do and decides what he will do now?
Go to this padlet Arctic Circle and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similes and metaphors.
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Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
I am in the Arctic Circle. It was colder than being in the antarctic sea, my neighbor was working on something that could change the world. I hated him, people say that he is smarter than me, but he won’t be. It was morning I was hungry then a big fat hippo, my neighbor came out of his little house ‘’good morning’’ said my neighbor, I just look away and through to myself I should punch him.
I started to spin a handle that grows apples, it takes for ever!. My neighbor went back into his little house while I was growing my apples. I had an idea to go to his house and put a bomb there, as I was thinking an apple fell on my head, I started to scream because I thought it was aliens.
But there was a box, I wonder what in it. I walked to it like a small mouse it moved ‘’THERE IS A ALIENS!’’ I yelled but i’m not stupid so I run to it and I touch.
BOOM!! I flew in the air and hit my head on the tree, my neighbor came out his little house and started to laugh. But when I touched the tree it grow apples, I was so surprised. I was thinking that when I touch the box I would grow apples without taking for ever!.
But then the box started to move, ‘’HEY USE YOUR NOGGIN DON’T GO TO HIM’’ I was kind of a bum. It moved again then I started to ran after it, ‘’COME HERE!’’ I yelled, I blocked it’s way I jumped on it.
Then the box was gone then my hands turned yellow now I was happy but then I was turning into a box ‘’NO NO!!’’ I yelled ‘’NO!’’ I was a box know sounds stupid but really i’m a box.
Thursday, March 23, 2017
Thursday, March 16, 2017
Lighthouse keeper
This is my thing link. It's about a lighthouse keeper who doesn't get his lunch,
Hope you like it!
Pangarau DLO 2017
This is my DLO my WALT is to make a question with a bigger number, hope you like it.
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