- Full stops, capital letters,
- We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
Wednesday, May 24, 2017
Titanium slow writing
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.
Click on the url below and watch the short clip.
Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.
We need to focus on these things
To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy. These are our sentence tools today -
Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then
Sentence 2 - 3_ed
Sentence 3 - 2A
Sentence 4 - Where opener
Sentence 5 - Adverb opener
Sentence 6 - Short sentence
Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;
Sentence 8 - Short sentences
Here are some examples
Go to this padlet Titanium and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
If I stayed home if I just stayed focusing on my homework if I listen to my teacher then I would be ok. I was so scared and I felt abandoned and I was terrified for what was coming. The only thing I remember is that A man came up to my but it could be a man or a alien. I was a my school I felt down I looked everywhere there were papers and broken pencil but I heard something it was like called out to my so I followed it. I scaredly went to open the that the sound of someone weirdly called out to me. I felt chills going down my spine. I was tightening my fist and scratching my my hair like I had nits and I felt like I was a man. I was finally out but it was not the end.